Tuesday, October 6, 2009

A love that lasts?

I will bring you a rose everyday
for years.
one day, your face will wear down
and will have lines on them
unlike the rose.
But will I go away from you that day?
Not at all,
I will be old too
and you will be all I will ever want.

I will walk with you
to the garden every evening
and one day,
our love will not be fresh as it is today.
You will not giggle at every word I say,
I will not turn my head every few seconds
to see your radiant face
but our love will have grown,
ripened with age like wine
and i know I will love you more
than I will ever have before.

6 comments:

Unknown said...

its truly amazing.........really touches heart......well done buddy

RD said...

big fan!!

Abhishek said...

thats nice to hear from a poet of ur calibre ruchira.
@ payal - thanx dear!

Unknown said...

this was really a heart touching one.......aussssummmm i must say :) :)

Nishant Sinha said...

just one word...OUTSTANDING!!!
3 more..Keep It UP!!! :)

Unknown said...

Superb its one of the heart touching poems I ever read..Is it for someone special like.........